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Learning More About My Characters

Kate Messner’s guest on Teachers Write today is Heidi Schulz, and she teaches us about Creating Compelling Characters. Here are two brief interviews with my protagonist and a supporting character.

LILY: More than anything, I want to be reunited with my mother. This never changes, but I realize that I can’t wait for her to figure out where I am. I have to do something to help her get back to me. However, I learn that something may be preventing her from finding me, so I have to go search for her. I’m afraid that, even if she has a job now, she still won’t be able to take care of me, and that I’ll have to stay in this orphanage until I’m 16 and am forced to live on my own. I would sacrifice anything to have my Momma and me together again.

SISTER MARY ROSE: I want more than anything to teach all children the love of Jesus, and how to live in order to glorify Him. However, Lily is teaching me that children must feel loved themselves, before they can understand Jesus’ love. Secretly, I wish I had never lost my family when I was around Lily’s age, and this makes me want to do what I can to help her be reunited with her mother. I’m afraid that she will be heartbroken that her mother cannot support her. I would sacrifice anything to protect Lily and the other children.

This was a great exercise for helping me get to know my characters a little better. I plan to “interview” all of my characters in my novel.


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An Interview with one of My Antagonists

In today’s lesson Teachers Write on Kate Messner’s blog, author Tracey Baptiste explores Voice. Two of the exercises have us become one of our characters and answer interview questions, and then flip the switch and become the opposite of that character and answer the same questions. Here is what I wrote as a result.


Exercise 2: Becoming Your Character

I love my country more than anything else. I hate anyone who makes me out to be anti-American, or not loyal to my country. I am jealous of anyone who has a higher status than I do. If I could do anything, I would convince my husband to ask for a promotion at work, so we could buy a nicer home. My biggest secret is that my mother hated this country. She never wanted to leave Germany, and so she never learned to speak English. I was teased by other children because of her; Therefore I did not love her.

Exercise 3: Flip the Switch

I love my family more than anything else. I hate when people are teased or called out for being Anti-American, when they have given their whole lives to pulling their own weight in America and building a life their ancestors would be proud of. I’m jealous of women who can have more children. If I could do anything, I would have my husband take more vacation time so we could go to the shore.

These exercises helped in that I was totally surprised by Mrs. Schmidt’s biggest secret. I had no idea!

Try these exercises and see what your characters reveal to you.

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Finding Your Muse at Garage Sales

 Late April marks the beginning of a new season in my neck of the woods. I’m not talking about spring, although Mother Nature does usually show up around then as well. No, the season I’m talking about is such an important part of Central New York that it demands media attention: Garage Sale Season. One local country music station, as well as their sister television news channel, cover the Grand Opening of the season at one large community garage sale. The hordes of shoppers get to enjoy an early breakfast before venturing out, and then they spend the rest of the day bargain hunting. This opening day has become an annual tradition in our region, and in fact draws devotees from other states as

Why is this event, and the smaller ones that follow, such a big deal to a writer such as me?  Well, ok I do like a great deal as much as the next person, but more than that, I have discovered that these outdoor shopping centers provide a unique opportunity to add some depth to my writing. Stay with me here as I illustrate how garage sales can help you with your writing a  well.

 Brainstorming Story Ideas

Ideas for stories can come from garage sales. At one of your stops, buy a nice box or attractive container. It doesn’t have to be very large. Then, as you travel
from house to house, select small items from the sales and place them in the box. Back at home, when you need inspiration for a story or article, remove an
item from the box and start writing! Be as descriptive as possible and before you know it, you will have the beginning of a new story!

Gathering Character Traits

Eavesdrop on conversations among buyers and sellers. When people go to garage sales together, they talk a lot between stops and while perusing the wares. They make comments about the items as they pick them up. Often the seller has an interesting story to tell about an item. Note these conversations, including the body language used and inflections in the peoples’ voices. Also be sure to observe their clothing, the way they walk, and the car they’re driving. At one sale I happened upon, a metal junker dickered with the homeowner for her washer and dryer. His nearby pickup was loaded down with the metal he had managed to collect that day. He was an interesting character. Don’t forget about yourself as a character at these garage sales. How do you feel when you come across a toy or game you remember from your childhood? When you get back to your car, grab your notebook (you do carry one with you, don’t you?) and  jot down these emotions and physical reactions as well.

Establishing Setting

What is the weather like on the day you attended the sale? If you went in the early morning, was there dew on the grass and did you clutch your Styrofoam cup of coffee as you strolled from sale to sale? Was it a community garage sale or one at a single home? Did you venture into a neighborhood completely different from your own? What did the houses look like? Were the lawns nicely manicured, the backyard fenced in? Or did the houses looked “lived in” and in need of some TLC? All of these details and more are important to note for future reference.  A hazy-hot-humid day at a garage sale feels completely different from a cold and rainy afternoon of neighborhood shopping.

Building a Story

My daughter suggests that a garage sale shopper/writer can find items that will help them create a visual representation of their story. Buy stickers, stamps and stamp pads, or other items that will allow you to make an illustration, story board, or model of your story. Buy a map and plan a traveling character’s route. Another option is to buy an item that your character would use so that you have it for an accurate description. Does your character drink coffee all the time? Find a mug that looks and feels like one that fits your character and buy it. Keep it around you at all times. Drink from it to get a first-hand feel for how the coffee would taste and how the mug feels to your character. Start writing!

Feeding Your Muse

At a recent community garage sale, I picked up two books from my summer reading list. I’ve also found great deals on children’s books and sometimes reference books (atlases, dictionaries, a one-year-old Writer’s Market, etc). One sale I went to was hosted by a retiring 6th-grade teacher. She had stocked her garage with class sets of novels, as well as teacher reference sources, non-fiction books, and inspirational posters. As writers we need to keep reading. While you may find that many books sold at garage sales are mass market paper backs, you might be surprised to find that one book you’ve always wanted to read, but didn’t want to spend the money on. Now you’d be foolish to pass it up. Also, some sellers offer bundles of magazines to buyers. Don’t turn up your nose at these, as any pictures in them offer opportunities for you to write descriptive scenes, or even great ideas for articles and stories.

So, have you been to a garage sale lately? Go back to your Sunday paper and open it up to the classified/garage sale section. Or you can search on Craigslist.com for sales near you.  Find one nearby, or far away, and make plans to find your muse when you get there.

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